100 Word Challenge # 12

So what lies ahead? Terry wondered as he started to daydream during class. TERRY!!!!! Yelled the teacher at terry. If I catch you daydreaming in class one more time I am going to give you a detention. “Yes miss” replied Terry tiredly. Maybe it was something to do with his life. After detention he walked home because he missed the bus. When he got home he remembered that he was going to the wheel of fortune that night. He thought that he should guess what lies ahead. He got it right and  his family became billionaires.

 

100 word challenge #11

I was walking around looking for a good spot to dig a hole to live in. I saw a perfect place, it was the best place to make a hole. I started to dig but the dirt was too hard. So I tried again. The next hole I dug but it was too soft.  The dirt kept slipping down like sand on a sand dune. I was about to try for a third time, when some people came along. I had to hide so I ran behind a bush. The people wear freaking out they said it was big foot.

100 word challenge #10

 

I just ran onto the field ready to go and score some goals. It was the grand final Barcelona vs PSG. I got the ball and was dribbling down the field, I was about to score. The umpire called it offside. I was devastated. PSG booted it down the field, our team intercepted it, Messi was dribbling up the field, he pasted it to me then I sprinted down the field to the goals. I had a shot but I missed. It was a corner Messi kicked it, I went for the header but then everything suddenly went dark.

 

100 word challenge # 9

I  was in the Amazon. I was cutting down bushes in my way with my friend Quinn the monkey as it came rushing towards us. It was a pack of rhinos charging towards us. We ran as fast as we could until we reach a cliff . We did not know what to do.  We were tired but the rhinos were still coming towards us. We had no choice but to jump. So we jump and Quinn and I managed to hold onto a weed as the rhinos ran of the cliff. We were safe that was close.

My forever home

Physical

The author has explored physical characteristics of the character by describing him, as climbing to the very top of the tree and he has  big ears. The main character purrs so I think he is a cat. His name is Sammie.During the story sammie grows biger so his ears do not look so big anymore

Intellectual

The author has explored intellectual characteristics of the character by having the main character very confused about what is happening to his home.Sammie learns as the story develops a liking for humans because the mum gives him a big comfortable box with a fluffy blanket.He is smart because he can get his own food.

Emotional

The author has explored emotional characteristics of the character by telling us that Sammie was happy to find a good place to call home, he had a sea view. Sammies feeling change thoughtout the story because his owners gave food to him he liked them.

Philosophical

The author has explored philosophical characteristics of the character by having Sammie’s beliefs change throughout the story because he now has a best friend and he is worth purring for. Sammie’s life is very easy at the end. He gets things like food and his own small house.Sammie believes that his life is the best because he has a favourite  tree and a cosy bed and the best thing is that there is no one to bug him.

Social

The author has explored social characteristics of the character by telling us Sammie chooses Ethan to be his best friend as he cares about him because Ethan lets him sleep on his bed every night. And he worries about Sammie when he goes out side in the cold. Sammie’s social standing has changed thoughout the story, at the start he was by himself and then he finds a family.

 

 

5 facts of fiction # Charles

Fact#1-Fiction is all about the characters.

  • Trying to make you keep reading.
  • The main character is Laurie.
  • Laurie is a young boy because he uses crayons and a seesaw.
  • Laurie’s personality is cheeky and naughty.
  • The author did not explain how he got to be this way.

 

Fact#2- Fiction is all about what your character wants.

  • Laurie wants attention to make friends

 

Fact#3- Fiction is all about how your character gets or does not get what he or she wants

  • Yes and no because he gets attention and he gets in trouble.
  • Yes because the mum and dad found out that there is no Charles in the class.
  • His mum and dad would always find out. Laurie makes up excuses to not get in trouble like, ‘’Charles yelled so much that the teacher made every one stay in after school’’.

 

Fact#4-Fiction is all about how your character changes

  • Charles is actually Laurie

 

Fact#5-Fiction is all about a world an author creates

“This is a world where”…

A boy named Laurie. He is naughty, cheeky and he is very mean at school. He makes excuses not to get in trouble and blames it on an imaginary boy named Charles.  5

read like a writer #2

IDEARS

WHEN YOU TERN ELEVEN YOU STILL FEEL TEN

ORGANIZATION

THE ORGANIZATION IS GOOD AND THEY HAVE PUT IT IN TO PARAGRAPHS TO MAKE IT LOOK SHORTER.

VOICE

THE VOIEIS GOOD BECAUSE IT MACHES HER FEELINGS

WORD CHOICE

I THINK THEY USED SENSABLE WORDS AND PRASES IN THE STORY.

SENTENCE FLUENCY

I THINK THE STORY WAS VERY GOOD AND IT WORK WELL with the story

CONVENTIONS

The story was easy to read because of the punctuation and grammer was good

read like a reader #1

 

 

PREDICTION

I THINK THAT ITS ABOUT A GIRL AND SHE IS DIFFERENT FROM OTHER PEOPLE

QUESTION

WHY DOSE HER MOM WANT HER TO BE A NORMAL GIRL?

INFER

SHE IS VERY STUBEN

CONNECT

I have been in hospital

FEEL

SHE FELT SAD AND THEN SHE FELT HAPPY

EVALUATE

KNOW ONE IS THE SAME

 

project reflection # 2

What were the most important things I learnt?

I think that I learnt the most researching and doing our power point.

 

How did we learn it?

We had put the information into our own words.

 

What I am going to do with what I learnt?

I am going to use it for another project.

 

Conclusion

I enjoy working on my project and I found it very interesting I liked my power point and I learnt a lot of new information about a plant.

project reflection # 1

In term 2 we had to do a project on the Australia desert we could pit a plant or an animals. About five weeks to the end of term we were tolled that we were doing a project with a partner. We had to include information report, a diagram , a model and a experiment. we had to use our colligative skills to work well with in a group. Ana we had to do it by ourselves. My partner and I did our power point on the sturts desert pea. My partner was Stella.

 

 

  1. The sturts desert an grow up to two meters high.
  2. 10 seeds fit into a 2 dollar coin.
  3. The scientific name is Swainsona Formosa.

 

  1. that the sturts desert pea is red not green
  2. there is a pea family

 

  1. I wonder if you can eat the sturts desert pea?

 

Three facts that you found interesting or surprising.

Two understandings you now have.

One wonder you still have.