100 word challenge#athletics day

 

On your mark, get set, go!!! Beep!!!!!!! I’m running as fast as I can, I’m just coming first. About 10 meters to go 8 meters to go, I’m sprinting now. 5 meters to go, 4 meters to go, 3 meters to go, 2 meters to go 1 meter to go. I came first. I am so happy. Next event is long jump. Lets go, first attempt…fail. Second attempt…excellent. I won!!!!!!!!!!!! It’s the second time I’ve come first.

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  1. Hey Ambrose,
    great recount. I liked how you compacted the story into only 100 words. I think you would only need 1 exclamation mark when you think you should have one. When you said ‘meters’ it is actually supposed to be ‘metres’. Also at your starting sentence you wrote ‘on your mark’ I think it would be ‘on your marks”. I liked you piece of writing all up seeing as that is your first post. Maybe look on my blog to see how I write my 100 word challenges. (lucca2013.global2).Great writing.
    Thanks, Lucca

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