read like a writer #2

IDEAS

WHEN YOU TURN ELEVEN YOU STILL FEEL TEN.

ORGANISATION

THE ORGANISATION IS GOOD AND THEY HAVE PUT IT IN TO PARAGRAPHS TO MAKE IT LOOK SHORTER.

VOICE

THE VOICE GOOD BECAUSE IT MACHES HER FEELINGS.

WORD CHOICE

I THINK THEY USED SENSABLE WORDS AND PHRASES IN THE STORY.

SENTENCE FLUENCY

I THINK THE STORY WAS VERY GOOD AND IT WORK WELL with the story

CONVENTIONS

The story was easy to read because of the punctuation and grammer was good

read like a reader #1

 

 

PREDICTION

I THINK THAT ITS ABOUT A GIRL AND SHE IS DIFFERENT FROM OTHER PEOPLE

QUESTION

WHY DOSE HER MOM WANT HER TO BE A NORMAL GIRL?

INFER

SHE IS VERY STUBEN

CONNECT

I have been in hospital

FEEL

SHE FELT SAD AND THEN SHE FELT HAPPY

EVALUATE

KNOW ONE IS THE SAME