WHEN YOU TURN ELEVEN YOU STILL FEEL TEN.
THE ORGANISATION IS GOOD AND THEY HAVE PUT IT IN TO PARAGRAPHS TO MAKE IT LOOK SHORTER.
THE VOICE GOOD BECAUSE IT MACHES HER FEELINGS.
I THINK THEY USED SENSABLE WORDS AND PHRASES IN THE STORY.
I THINK THE STORY WAS VERY GOOD AND IT WORK WELL with the story
The story was easy to read because of the punctuation and grammer was good